Authorial Voice and Style

NOTESA fellow author asked recently what the difference is between voice and style–a questions many authors (and readers) struggle with.I use music [specifically vocal music] to distinguish between ‘Voice’ and ‘Style’.

Voice is a unique and recognizable combination of tone, pitch, timber and resonance. [I’m certain musicians have a more technical definition.] For example, if you think of the song “The First Time, Ever I Saw Your Face” as sung by both Roberta Flack and Celine Dion the voices are absolutely distinct. The song (and it’s style) is almost exactly the same. However, you cannot mistake which voice is singing when you hear it.

Style may, or may not be unique, but is made up mostly of the artist’s technical choices in things like pace, volume, tonal combinations (chords in multi-voice groups, runs, trills etc. for soloists), and arrangement (which notes are placed where, which octaves are selected etc.). Consider the differences between musical styles like jazz, ragtime, blues, gospel etc. Two individual singers can create radically different versions of the same song not only because of each singer’s unique voice, but also because of the ‘stylistic’ choices the vocalist makes. Further, an artist may change his/her style but cannot change his/her voice (not without considerable effort and expertise).


An author’s ‘voice’ is similar to a vocalist’s in that no two authors will develop the same story idea in the same way. The voice is most evident when a work is read aloud, but still very present when read silently. Authorial voice resembles authorial style in that the tools used to create a unique voice and a unique style are similar—pacing, tone, word choice, volume. However, I could—for example—write in the style of Hemingway, Shakespeare, Fitzgerald, Margaret Mitchell, Charlotte Bronte etc. Yet any story I wrote in another author’s style or the style of another age would always be written in my own voice.


One caution. The terms ‘Voice’ and ‘Style’ are also used to identify specific grammatical structures and practices that have little to do with an individual’s ‘authorial voice and style.’ Be absolutely clear when using these two terms that your audience understands which type of ‘voice’ or ‘style’ you are referring to.

An example that illustrates the points above is my erotic romance Off Limits. I wanted to write a story that resembled O’Henry’s Gift of the Magi, one of my favorite love stories. However, I am not O’Henry. I am Rue Allyn and despite similarities of sacrifices exchanged in the name of love, no one would ever mistake Off Limits for The Gift of the Magi or my voice and style for O’Henry’s.

Here’s a short blurb about Off Limits and a link to more information about the book. For Senior Chief Hank O’Mara no woman Off Limits cover artcould compare with the sea until he met Lieutenant Bethany Morton. Only the sea could draw two passionate people of such opposite backgrounds together, and only US Navy regulations could keep them apart. Because fraternization between Officer and enlisted is forbidden, both Beth and Hank do their utmost to resist the passion and love growing between them. However, love proves stronger than either the sea or the USN. If they are to be together, Hank must sacrifice his career, and Beth will risk the destruction of her professional dreams.

Click here for more about Off Limits http://rueallyn.com/2b1OLexcerpt.html, or buy the book at http://www.amazon.com/Rue-Allyn/e/B00AUBF3NI.

Please leave a comment and share your thoughts about voice and style in the stories you read and/or write. Your comments are my greatest reward. Feel free to share the link to this article with your reader and author friends.

 

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Celebrate the release of Shay Lacy’s ~ Sacrificed to Ecstasy

Cover Artfor Sacrificed to EcstasySacrificed to Ecstasy

Virgin sacrifice. Those words make you envision a woman chained and screaming, a horrible monster, a painful death. But what if that sacrifice was to the sexiest man alive, a virile god of fertility, one who made your body throb with want? What if that man looked like the man on the cover?Author Shay Lacy

Would it really be a sacrifice with him? My heroine, Rayan, will learn that what she gives up to Vashon is nothing compared to the pleasure she reaps in return.

Multi-published author Shay Lacy lives in northwest Ohio with her photographer/graphic designer husband. She loves following the man of her dreams with a camera in hand and a pen and notebook in her backpack. Sensible secretary by day, romance author by night, when not lost in her imagination, or reading a good book, she is likely researching her next book with a SWAT team ride-along or a visit to a DNA lab. Find out more about Sacrificed to Ecstasy and Shay Lacy at  http://www.shaylacy.com/blog and http://www.ellorascave.com/sacrificed-to-ecstasy.html.

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Guess Who Got Lucky in the Drawing for a Sexy Sailor Book

I’m delighted to announce that Kaitlin is the winner of a free download of Hazard Duty ~ Sexy Sailors # 2. Because I enjoyed all the comments so much I had my very own sexy sailor draw from among the qualified entrants. Congratulations to Kaitlin and all who entered. Rue A.Hazard Duty Cover Art

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Getting Lucky—With Erotic Romance Military Heroes and a Drawing for a Free E-Book


Personally, I read romance for the HEA, the characters and—of course—the sexy men. I know I’m biased but I think I got really lucky with USN Senior ChiefOff Limits cover art Hank O’Mara and USN Chief Joe Hazard, the heroes of my Sexy Sailor series. These men are everything that’s good about the US Navy, honorable, upstanding, strong, dedicated and everything a reader could want in a romantic hero, handsome, sexy, smart, considerate lovers. Neither one starts his book thinking he’ll ever fall in love—not the forever kind, but both accept love whole-heartedly once it finds them. Take a look at these excerpts from Off Limits andHazard Duty Cover Art Hazard Duty on my website then come back here and tell me which book you’d like to have for free and why? Everyone who comments gets put into the drawing. Winners announced here on Monday, April 15, 2013. Enjoy!

Can’t wait for the drawing, purchase one or both Sexy Sailor books at http://www.amazon.com/author/Rue-Allyn.

Author of historical, contemporary, and erotic romances, Rue Allyn fell in love with happily ever after the day she heard her first story. She is deliriously married to her sweetheart of many years and loves to hear from readers about their favorite books and real life adventures.  Learn more about Rue at http://RueAllyn.com

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I’m on the radio — sorta

Cover Art for One Moment's PleasureTonight the brave and gracious Kathy Wheeler is interviewing me on MFRW’s Blog Talk Radio Channel. She and I are firsts together at this so we could use your support. Kathy has the hard job of asking questions and getting me to talk about my books and the writing life. Please listen in tonight at 11p Eastern, 10p Central, 9p Mountain, or 8p Pacific. We’ll be using twitter hashtag #BRT as well. Here’s the BTR Link. http://www.blogtalkradio.com/marketingforromancewriters/2013/03/27/happily-ever-after-with-rue-allyn.

One Moment’s Pleasure will become a lifetime’s passion when spinster, Edith Alden, embarks on a search for her missing sister.  Pretending to be a rich bored woman looking for an interlude with an anonymous male Edith enters the San Francisco bordello where her sister was last seen. She escapes the bordello almost too easily, but she can’t escape the passion ignited by a stranger’s kiss.

 Born and raised in the brothels of the California gold rush, Dutch Trahern worked for years to erase a childhood spent committing petty crimes and worse in order to survive. That past comes back to haunt him in the form of a woman he rescues from prostitution. Now his hard won respectability is threatened by an irresistible desire for a woman he shouldn’t want.

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Please Welcome Devon Ellington

Please tell us about yourself and your most recent project.

I’m a full-time writer, publishing under a half a dozen names in fiction and non-fiction. My plays are produced in New York, Massachusetts, London, Edinburgh, and Australia. I provide business writing and editing services for an international client base, and I teach both online and in-person all over the world.

My latest novel release is the second Jain Lazarus Adventure, from Solstice Publishing, called OLD-FASHIONED DETECTIVE WORK. The first one, HEX BREAKER, Cover Art for Old Fashioned Detective Workpaired up hex breaker Jain Lazarus with cynical detective Wyatt East on the set of an independent film with some preternatural problems. In OLD-FASHIONED DETECTIVE WORK, Jain disappears after a romantic weekend with Wyatt, and he’s the prime suspect in her disappearance. He decides to use old-fashioned detective work to track her down, although he winds up dealing with shape shifters, teens with paranormal abilities, and a cantankerous mermaid. He and Jain also start revealing their pasts to each other and having to face the consequences — many of which ratchet up in book 4, LOVE AND FURY. Book 3, on which I’m currently working, CRAVE THE HUNT, is mostly from Billy Root’s point of view. He became a fan favorite after HEX BREAKER released, and there was more to his story after HEX BREAKER.

I’m also in the process of releasing a series of non-fiction Topic Workbooks, based on classes and seminars I teach (since I have to cut back my teaching schedule). They cover areas like SETTING UP YOUR SUBMISSION SYSTEM, THE SERIES BIBLE: CREATION AND MAINTENANCE, CREATIVE STIMULUS, and the like. They’re up on Smashwords.

Now for Devon’s answers to our ‘weird questions.’

1. What CD is in your CD player right now?
“Beautiful Wasteland” by Capercaillie.

2. What is the meaning of life?
Be kind, but don’t stand by and allow cruelty by others.

3. What do you want written on your tombstone?
I plan to be cremated and scattered in the ocean; but I hope people remember me as committed to positive change, and I hope they throw a big party in my honor and tell funny stories.

4. What time do you normally get to be on a working day?
When that day’s work is done. Writing is not a 9-5 job. When you have a deadline, you honor it, not matter what else is going to hell in a hand basket in your life. There’s no such thing as “no time to write.”

5. If you could be born into history as any famous person, who would it be and why?
Shakespeare. I’d love to live that level of brilliance from inside.

Blurb for Old Fashioned Detective Work:
Detective Wyatt East finds himself the primary suspect when hex breaker Jain Lazarus disappears after their romantic weekend in Vermont. In spite of the suspicions, Jain’s boss, Maitland Stiles, hires Wyatt to track her down, forcing him to face aspects of his own painful past and revealing more about hers. Saddled with two rebellious runaway paranormal teens, he’s embroiled in a shapeshifter pack disagreement, and must learn to work with both a caustic dragon and a cantankerous mermaid to not only find Jain, but help her help an old friend who’s in over his head. Wyatt learns he is not without psychic abilities of his own, although he prefers old-fashioned detective work.

Links:
The Jain Lazarus Website: http://hexbreaker.devonellingtonwork.com
Devon Ellington Work: http://www.devonellingtonwork.com
Ink in My Coffee, a daily blog on the ups and downs of the writing life: http://devonellington.wordpress.com
Twitter: @DevonEllington

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Jean Drew

Welcome Jean, I’m so happy you’re able to be here. Please tell us a little bit about yourself. I was born in England but live in New Zealand. I once wanted to be the next Agatha Christie but when I read my first romance it was love at first read. But I never say never. I Author, Jean Drewstill might try my hand at a mystery one day.

Please tell us about your most recent release. My most recent release from The Wild Rose Press is called A Man Like Saxon, a contemporary romance set in New Zealand. The hero is a Hollywood movie director who enjoys hot air ballooning, (the ballooning based on my own experiences). He wants to make his movie on the heroine’s land.

And now for Jean’s ‘weird questions.’

1. What is the most distant place you’ve visited (from your home)?AManLikeSaxon_w6532_300

That depends in what you call my home. When I lived in England, New Zealand was furthest from my home. But now I live in New Zealand, England is the furthest. I’ve travelled both ways.

2. If you had to choose between a million bucks and being able to fly, which would you choose?

That depend in what you mean by bucks. If you mean male deer, I’d choose being able to fly. But if you mean dollars, I’d choose dollars.

3. You just got a free plane ticket to anywhere. You have to depart right now. Where are you gonna go?

Monaco, but only if the ticket is first class. I’d like to arrive in the style to which I hope to become accustomed.

4. An angel appears out of Heaven and offers you a lifetime supply of the alcoholic beverage of your choice. “Be brand-specific” it says. Man! What are you gonna say about that? Even if you don’t drink booze there’s something you can figure out… so what’s it gonna be?

Champagne – Dom Perignon

5. Rufus appears out of nowhere with a time-traveling phone booth. You can go anytime in the PAST. What time are you traveling to and what are you going to do when you get there?

Ancient Egypt. I’d spend some time following pharaoh around just to see exactly what he does, see the splendour of his court. Watch the workmen building a pyramid, wander through the markets, really soak up the atmosphere then come back and turn it into a best-selling novel.

6. One night you wake up because you heard a noise. You turn on the light to find that you are surrounded by MUMMIES. The mummies aren’t really doing anything, they’re just standing around your bed. What do you do?

I tell them, “If you weren’t so wrapped up in yourselves you might not have lost your Daddies.” J

Haha! I love your humor and your voice. So, here’s the blurb for Jean’s next terrific book A Man Like Saxon.
Be careful what you wish for. You just might get it.

Danielle Montgomery hides a terrible secret that binds her to a life of loneliness she believes she deserves. She has never wished for anything more from her humdrum life. Up, up and away. Come, fly with sexy Saxon.
When film director, Saxon Wainwright, drops in from a clear blue sky, wanting to make his movie on her property, he blows Danielle’s narrow world apart. Is Saxon the nemesis Danielle is expecting?

Buy Link:
AmazonKindle: A Man Like Saxon

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Constance Phillips Does a Re-appearing Act (sort of)

Thank you so much, Rue, for having me on your blog today with this fun interview.

1. Please tell us a little bit about yourself.
Wife. Mother. Writer. I love spending time with my family when I’m not working in my husband’s business or on one of my books.  Author, Constance Phillips
2. Please tell us about your most recent release.
That would be Resurrecting Harry, just released on March 1. The book imagines a world where Harry Houdini was able to escape death to help save his widow, Bess from her self-destructive past.
It’s an alternate timeline story, yes. But it’s also a story about fated love, and treasuring the time we have.
3. Are you a “dogperson” or a “catperson”?
Dog person. Definitely a dog person. We are owned by our two Olde English Bulldogges, Yellow Lab, and one fluffy mutt.
4. Who is the fourth person on your missed calls?
My sister-in-law.
5. What were you doing at midnight last night?
Starting a server migration for my website. Yes, pre-release butterflies had settled in and brought with them insomnia.
6. Last furry thing you touched?
My Fluffy mutt, Mocha. She’s sitting on my lap as I type this up.
7. What is your current desktop picture?
My book covers, to remind me that if you work hard enough anything is possible.


Resurrecting Harry ~ Can the greatest escape artist ever known break the grim reaper’s chains to save the only woman he’s ever loved?Cover Art for Resurrecting Harry
In order to save Bess from self-destruction, Harry Houdini puts his afterlife on the line by entering a wager with purgatory’s keeper. He gives Harry a younger face and body, and a new name: Erich Welch. Bess clings to his promise to deliver a coded message from beyond the grave, determined to provide the bridge for him to cross, even if that means befriending her husband’s sworn enemy. Erich needs to help Bess over her loss and put her on the road to healing, but will any good come from resurrecting Harry?

Bio ~ Constance Phillips lives in Ohio with her husband, two ready-to-leave-the-nest children, and four canine kids. Her perfect fantasy vacation would involve hunting Dracula across Europe with her daughter, who also digs that kind of stuff. When she’s not writing about fairies, shifters, vamps, and guardian angels, she’s working side-by-side with her husband in their hardwood flooring business. Constance is actively involved in her local Romance Writers of America chapter (MVRWA) and the Southeast Michigan chapter of the United States Pony Club. When not writing or enjoying the outdoors, she loves reality television or can be found at a Rick Springfield concert (just look for the pink Converse high tops).
 
Website/blog: http://constancephillips.com/
Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6470282.Constance_Phillips
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/ConstancePhillipsRomanceAuthor?ref=hl
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/CPhillips

Buy links
Amazon POD : http://www.amazon.com/Resurrecting-Harry-Constance-Phillips/dp/1939173132/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1361977605&sr=8-3&keywords=Resurrecting+Harry
Amazon Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/Resurrecting-Harry-ebook/dp/B00BLBKDDQ/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1361977605&sr=8-1&keywords=Resurrecting+Harry

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Who’s Your Wildfire Love ~ TRS Release Party

Cover art for One Moment's Pleasure ~ Wildfire Love # 1 Cover Art for The Widow's Revenge Off Limits, cover art Cover Art for Hazard Duty, Sexy Sailors # 2

The first of three posts at http://trsparties.com/2013/03/07/whos-your-wildfire-love/ is live. I want readers to choose which Wildfire Love they like best. Check it out and spread the word please. I’m celebrating all of my hunky heroes in three different posts throughout the day, so please keep checking back at http://trsparties.com/2013/03/07/whos-your-wildfire-love/. Comments at the release party are sincerely appreciated.

 

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And the Winner Is. . .

Book, cover, romance, Rue Allyn, Western, historical, novel, author, writer, 1870, San Francisco, chocolate, prize, gift card, vote, word-biteShadowLuvs2Read. In a hard fought race between word bites #1 and # 4, # 1 emerged the victor. From all the votes cast for that word bite, the contributor drawn was ShadowLuvs2Read. Shadow, I’ll be contacting you privately within the next twenty four hours to arrange delivery of your prize. For the rest of you, I have edited your comments to remove all visible e-mail addresses.

I want to thank everyone who participated and who commented. This was my first attempt at running this kind of drawing, and I think it worked out fairly well. I know learned a lot from all the votes and comments. Don’t forget to leave a comment and let me know what you think about word bites and using them in a drawing.

If any of you wish to read these word bites in a little more context please follow this link to the excerpt for One Moment’s Pleasure found on my website.

I’ll be very busy over the next several weeks getting the word out about One Moment’s Pleasure. Please stop by often to learn what I’m up to, or visit the Heart Melting Romance website and check the calendar page.

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